I'm looking for a mainly gentle and encouraging critique. I welcome notation of typos and incorrect punctuation. First reaction and general overview critique -
Do you like the characters?
Would you read more short stories about them?
Are there any places that have too much info/dialog/detail?
How is the pacing?

If the above is acceptable to you, please send an email to me with Jasper in the subject line. moc.reality@ytilaer.com