I'm looking for a mainly gentle and encouraging critique. I welcome notation of typos and incorrect punctuation. First reaction and general overview critique - Do you like the characters? Would you read more short stories about them? Are there any places that have too much info/dialog/detail? How is the pacing?
If the above is acceptable to you, please send an email to me with Jasper in the subject line. moc.reality@ytilaer.com
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branchandroot
Short story - Jasper
Date: 2010-04-25 07:14 pm (UTC)Do you like the characters?
Would you read more short stories about them?
Are there any places that have too much info/dialog/detail?
How is the pacing?
If the above is acceptable to you, please send an email to me with Jasper in the subject line. moc.reality@ytilaer.com